• If you are citizen of an European Union member nation, you may not use this service unless you are at least 16 years old.

  • Work with all your cloud files (Drive, Dropbox, and Slack and Gmail attachments) and documents (Google Docs, Sheets, and Notion) in one place. Try Dokkio (from the makers of PBworks) for free. Now available on the web, Mac, Windows, and as a Chrome extension!


Plot Suggestions

Page history last edited by PBworks 14 years, 6 months ago

 Plot Suggestions


Chapter 1: I can't wait to see where this is going. I love whoever thought up the main character and his predicament. I threw in some extra details but didn't really push the plot forward very far. I kept all the plot points and details from whoever wrote before me, including the parapet, I just slowed it down so we could draw out the suspense and add more atmospheric details. --Anne



Overall this is a great story, but the chapters are really short. Slow down and enjoy each and every chapter! That's just my advice. :0) -- Enna Isilee



Right about slowing down, Enna Isilee.   Changes I just made to Chapter 4 are primarily to give a better sense of time.  I also didn't see a need to keep the reader in suspense as to what Finkel saw -- I think we already knew from Chapter 3.  As we move forward to Chapters 5 and beyond, let's not be afraid to enrich text in the other chapters! - (Jim D)

Comments (0)

You don't have permission to comment on this page.